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Creichl XV

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In Creglingen (called "Creichl"), a small town in the north-east of Baden-Württemberg (Germany).

The HDR shot was made from three photos with Photomatix.

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Image size
800x537px 491.43 KB
Model
DSC-RX10
Shutter Speed
100/24999 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
9 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Mar 29, 2015, 11:35:49 AM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I love this photo! The colors of the buildings are vibrant making it clear that they are the main focus of the picture. My only complaint is that the bush on the right distracts slightly from the buildings, because it also has vibrant colors. However, I would have to say it helps more than it harms, leading the eye from the right of the picture to the center if one does happen to be distracted by it. The sky is a nice, complimentary color, though it seems just a tiny, tiny bit light. however, the gradient changes across it you captured perfectly. Another thing is that the trees on the left bank get in the way of the yellow building a tiny bit too much, which takes away from its coloration again. Just a bit less foliage would let the color shine through more, (same applies to the houses slightly to the right of it). However, I understand that you can't change the scenery, so I'm going to say that there really isn't much to improve on. Maybe you could try to get closer to the town to largely eliminate the foliage covering the buildings on the left. You could also maybe enter the town and get a shot of whatever building the steeple on the left is(if you haven't already)- it seems interesting. Another thing would be if you could get on the river to get the town,, which I believe would look even better. The shot isn't exactly original, and you could've gotten it in better light- but despite it's (minor) flaws, the shot is nearly a prime example of its type.

Thank you for letting me critique this. I hope you enjoy it!